CIA Application - Max_Prison

[Max_Prison]

How long have you been playing on Argonath RPG?:  Since 17th January 2011.
What is your ingame name? Also list all previous: Max_Prison, i had it with tags but main name is Max_Prison
What is your age IRL?: 11, but if you think im a "Noob", becuase of my age, well, im not.
How well are your roleplaying skills? (1/10): 9/10
How well is your English? (1/10): 9/10
Why do you want to join the CIA? (100 words minimum): well, I saw the CIA, and i readed the rules, i saw what's CIA does, catching gangs, Crime Families, and all that, i thought it will be fun to be part of a fun group, of the law, and i saw that there is an Agent that is my friend, and he told me what CIA does in-game, so i decided to apply to CIA too, I wont do any crimes, unless it's allowed while im spying a gang or a Crime Family, or Drug Deals, Well, I se in CIA a lot of action, of catching terrorism and Crime Families.
Have you been part of any criminal organization? (List all of them): Green Gangsta', Ballas, TGG, Scaletta and Idlewood Bloods.
How many hours do you play per day?: 3 and more.
Do you agree to follow orders from agents higher ranked than you?: Yes.
Have you read all of our rules, and the Argonath RPG official rules?: Yes.
How long have you been working as a cop?: im going on duty some times, i know cop rules, and some codes.
Do you have any rank in the ARPD?: No.
What does the CIA focus on?: Mass terror of terrorist organizations and criminal families have been making the states an unsafe place for civilians

[crook]

Nice application, thank you for showing interest.
You will receive an answer soon!

[Emre]

I urgently recommend you to overwrite that application. I'm not responsible for these things, but there are more lies than letters.
1) You have neither engaged, nor seen a CIA process at all.
2) You were in a few other groups.
3) You told us the reason of why we focus, but yet not WHAT we are focussing on.

Make it more decent and then your chances will increase.